......或者說是出版社。
<一個乾淨明亮的地方>這本短篇小說節選讀到目前為止大約半本,我一點都沒有處在"乾淨明亮的地方"這種感覺.......有的只有滿腔說不出來的壓抑緊張。
當然,他寫的是人生,各式各樣看似可以理解又荒謬至極的人生百態,我本來就不能期待它們輕輕鬆鬆......不過既然取了那麼溫柔的名字就會希望.....,好歹下手也輕點......

也罷,其實這也不是第一次被詐欺了。很多年前當我還是個純真少女的時候就被<老人與海>騙夠本了。看到老人最後居然死了,我的少女心噢......(捂臉哭
 
 
 “You chose well,” Odin said. “Now go.”
For a moment, Loki hesitated, then quickly embraced his father, surprising
them both. Just as quickly, he let go and straightened up, pulling his
scattered masks and composure back together.

 Calculating chaos by Like_a_Hurricane
 Part 3 of Tricks of the Trade

 儘管原譯在翻譯Of Lairs Gifts and Gifted Lairs時評論到了後續的地方原作寫地有些OOC,但追下來以後真的不覺得這有什麼不好。如果Odin表達的疼愛可以再明顯一點而Loki可以坦率一點,就像文章裡寫的那樣,對我們這些粉來說其實真的是很大的安慰。再說......也沒有真的到OOC啦我認為,雖然有點小言了但是人物沒怎麼走形,只能說這作者比起Hella真是親媽來著。
 我很喜歡這個系列,但上次在湯上看到一篇專門給frostiron的專文裡沒有提到這篇,不免覺得有點可惜。Unsure and Hundard雖說也沒有提到就是......好消息是翻翻原作的專欄果然會有收穫,U的作者開了長篇而且已經寫到Ch13了多美好,暫時都不擔心缺糧了。
 
 但我還是好想看Hella妳的後續啊妳何時回來呢~~~~~~
 
 
 
 Something heavy started banging against the door. Tony really hoped it
wasn’t Jarvis’s head. Or Steve’s. Fury he could take or leave. Flexing his
frostbitten hands discretely, Tony glanced over as Loki’s skin began to
shift colour to the pale lines he remembered, even if they were streaked
in red. He’d heal soon enough.
“The things I endure to get you within my grasp,” Loki murmured to
himself, watching the blue as it was chased off his fingertips. “I had
thought often of killing you, Stark. Very creatively, at that. Then again, I
suppose you did warn me.”
“Warn you about what?” Tony asked tightly as Loki walked toward him,
strangely sure-footed on the frosty ground. Was this how it was going to
go, then? Kind of an anticlimactic end for him. He’d always thought
there’d be more explosions.
“That if I gave you a reason to doubt me, you would give no quarter.”
Loki stopped when he came face to face with Tony. His eyes were green
again, burning in his pale face. Bloody streaks ran down his cheeks like
tears. “I miscalculated. Underestimated you. That will never happen
again.”
The door started shuddering on its enormous hinges as Loki reached a
hand toward Tony’s throat. They weren’t going to make it in time.
“It never had to turn out like this,” Tony said, catching the hand before it
found his neck. His fingers threaded through Loki’s, ignoring the
stickiness of blood, the missing fingernails, the cracked skin. “Believe it
or not, you could have trusted me from the beginning.”
Loki was looking at their hands twined together with such a starved
bleakness in his eyes that for a moment Tony didn’t think he’d heard
what he’d said. But then he abruptly ripped his hand away, his eyes
blazing with wrath.
“Trust an Avenger?” he spat, jerking back. “Trust Iron Man? To what
end? You were a distraction, Stark, and you almost cost me everything.”
His voice turned cold. “I was better off on my own.”
It was funny how even then, with things turning out exactly like they had
that Tony still felt the dull punch of hurt at those words. All Tony had
done was try to help. That was all he’d ever done. But Loki couldn’t trust
him with the simplest truth – that he’d gotten in over his head. If Tony
had known about Amora’s ‘deal’ with Loki, if he’d had some kind of idea
that Thor might be attacked it could have all been so different.
But it was just all a distraction. A mistake.
“You’re right,” he said simply, watching Loki. “You didn’t need me. Why
would you have ever needed me? Look at you, you’ve got it all under
control.” His bark of laughter had no humour in it. “You don’t need
anyone but yourself.”
Loki took a long step back toward him, magic sparking at his fingertips
like he was preparing to strike Tony. But he was bleeding all over and
what wasn’t streaked with red was blistered and cracked, still
desperately trying to heal over the damage. Even his magic couldn’t do
two things at once, and the door was almost broken down.
In the end, revenge served cold seemed like the order of the day. Tony
held his breath and watched as Loki cursed and pulled back, the air
around his abused body gathering with light.
“Don’t think I am finished with you, Stark,” he said finally, the verdant
crackle of his magic reeking of ozone in the confined space. He was
already a breath away from teleportation. “When my business with
Amora is concluded, I will find you.”
Tony’s mouth twitched. “Honestly, I wouldn’t expect anything less.”
He watched the air around Loki tear to reveal a gaping dark wound and
wondered if he would ever see Loki again. All differences aside, he was
their only hope for Thor, even if his help was driven by grudges and
petty competition. Amora and Skurge could be formidable. They’d
proven that already.
“Good luck,” he blurted out, startling himself. Loki froze, half dissolving
as the teleportation took him. Tony made himself look him straight in the
eye before he vanished. “Don’t lose.”
Loki’s parting reply was swallowed by a screech of metal as the door
finally broke down. Then he was gone, vanished in a roar of dimensional
fire as he stepped out of existence. SHIELD agents and angry Avengers
poured into the cell but Tony barely noticed the shouting and alarms,
didn’t feel the hands running over the frostbitten palm-prints on his
skin. His entire thought process was alight with those two loaded words,
silently mouthed before he escaped the cell.
Trust me.
Asking the impossible again.
Figured.
Tony felt his hands jerked behind his back, then cold metal as handcuffs
were slapped on his wrists. Somewhere, Fury barked orders to his men.
Right, the springing a prisoner thing. Federal offences and all that.
Pepper was going to give him hell for this one. But Tony knew he’d made
the right call this time, and he’d even managed to keep his own personal
issues mostly out of it. If he had to be the guy that made the tough call
for the greater good, then so be it. He’d wear the punishment this time.
As long as Loki made good on his promise to get Thor’s soul back, Tony
would put up with just about anything.
In the meantime he just had to have faith in a brother’s broken bond, a
sorcerer’s magic and a liar’s promise.
Piece of cake.
Tony figured he could stand to gamble his hopes on a fool’s chanceJust this one time.

--------------------------------<Off record> by Hella 
The Avengers 2012,
Tony/Loki
 
 
 其實拍完這張我就覺得可以撤了.......XDDDD~
 
 第三年拍美加慶生,說不感動真的是騙人。很謝謝羽夜,每一次合作都有很棒的照片和很棒的回憶;當然了也要謝謝每一年都來幫忙拍照的朋友,小紅、李子&來探班的91和Hime,今年的小義&咖哩。受大家照顧了,我真的很感謝。

 &說說美/國君......
 慚愧的是即使這個角色都出了三年了,我還是很難把美國君掌握好Orz......到底要怎麼樣才能看起來開朗活潑呢?我總是苦惱這個問題bbb明明不擅長(可能也不適合)卻總是會被這類型的角色吸引,自己都無言以對了哈哈(艸
  
  anyway,Happy Birthday to Canada & America.
 
 
 果然,只要有法叔就夠了。
 
 David可愛倒讓我不斷想起銀河飛龍裡面的百科,有血有肉得讓人不動容都難。與百科不一樣的是,David對自己的感情表達是很直接的.......好的與壞的都是。這也造成了一些副作用,就是那種......極度的純真裡包含了那些因為無絕對道德觀念所造成的殘忍與冷漠,但縱然如此也很難讓我想苛責他。
我覺得最美麗的一段是當他開心的陶醉在宇宙頭影裡面時那種快樂又著迷的表情,真想讓人緊緊抱住他>/////<(太太自重

我很喜歡兩位女主角,都相當有個性。艦長還有David的爸爸其實也讓人頗動容......所以我不太理解為何這部片會有那麼多的批評?憑良心說它的闡述即始不夠嚴謹而完整,但導演想表達的訊息我認為已經足夠清楚。這些有空再來聊聊。

 &我無法克制的萌女主*David的CP.......愛到想要寫文救命(躺) 因為找不到文章我似乎只能自力救濟.......結尾那個雙人私奔不是超棒的嗎!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
London, iTunes Festival 2011

我好愛Chester的聲音,非常非常。甚至連聽他們在錄音室的小花絮,在演唱會上的熱場都會嘴角帶笑。
Adela這位歌手我其實不熟......但我好喜歡Cherster唱的版本。而且說真的,這確實也是一首好美的歌。

 
 
一樣是從論壇上找來的翻譯文,因為超想看到結局就......拚原文。

http://archiveofourown.org/works/298627
以上原文
http://www.mtslash.com/viewthread.php?tid=49112&extra=page%3D2
以上翻譯地址

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關於背景作者沒有多做敘述與補充,也沒有大綱提示。開始時一切都還算輕鬆明快,被噩夢糾纏的Loki在不得已之下向Thor求助,倆人共枕而眠後漸漸地發現他們對彼此之間真正的感情。推測時間點是在電影之前吧?在許多同人文之中不斷提到的,Asgrad的金色往昔。
在我讀過大多數以Loki為主的雷神衍生創作裡,這篇文章由Thor的角度出發,很細緻的探討了他內心的變化周折。從單純的關懷弟弟到最後無法克制地去愛,卻又難以說服自己可以理直氣壯的這麼做,這樣在身為王儲的道德責任與感情衝動間糾結的細膩Thor對我來說真的是很難得的呈現。會讓我想起The Hope Only Of Empty Men (這也是一篇很棒的文章,但是太艱澀了我必須花時間理解重組才能閱讀......譯者最近又不更新Orz......)中鷹眼對Thor說的那一句話--"你知道,他都叫你蠢蛋,但你真不是。"
Loki仍然討喜。我必須說句可能有些自以為是的偏頗話。以同樣是寫手的角度來看,我認為像Loki這樣的角色其實遠比Thor好寫。你可以用各種優美的諱莫如深的劇情來鋪排他讓他引起讀者的共鳴,遠比寫Thor還好輕鬆,因為Loki比起Thor有更多的面相可以探討與發揮。所以對於這裡Loki我即使喜愛但......因為他就是我所熟悉會在各種文章裡出現的Loki,所以非常遺憾他不是讓我對文章印象深刻的那一位,儘管他仍舊迷人。 


結局停在讓人悵然的地方,很難歸類為HE或BE,是個充滿想像空間的開放式結局。硬要打比方的話,就像全面啟動那樣,你一開始放下心來,下一秒卻開始提心吊膽,然而故事已戛然而止。

節錄兩段,先譯文後原文。這次自己動手倒不是因為口味不慣,純粹是推廣用途&譯者還沒翻到而已,哈哈。

節錄 1 :

Thor親吻Loki的頸背,一遍又一遍的在腦海中重複那些他無法大聲說出口的話。
我愛你。我會為了你永遠在你身邊,永遠。這並非由於人任何人指使他不該說這些,而是它確實如此。他想到他們的父親與母親,想到三勇士以及Sif和整個Asgard──沉睡中而且完全不知道才發生了甚麼事,甚麼正在發生。所有的一切都已然改變卻無人能夠阻止它,即使是他們自己。

“你認為我們錯了嗎?”Thor問。他不知道自己為什麼問,但是他內心有些讓人不快的部分卻驅使他渴望聽見Loki的回答。

Loki的聲音,當他終於在黑暗中開口,聽上去相當混濁,彷彿他才無聲的哭泣過。

“是的。”

Thor把Loki環抱得更緊。摟著他的弟弟一整夜。

早晨時,Loki已經再一次離開。



原文:

Thor kisses the back of Loki's neck, saying over and over again in his head what he's afraid to say out loud. I love you. I'll be there for you. Always. And it's not what anyone meant for them, but that's just how it is. He thinks about their mother and father, about the Warriors Three and Sif and all of Asgard - asleep and completely unaware of what just happened, of what is happening. Everything is changing and no one can stop it. Not even them.

"Do you think there's something wrong with us?" Thor asks. He doesn't know why he asks, but some sick part of him wants to hear Loki's answer.

Loki's voice, when he finally speaks into the darkness, sounds thick, like he's been crying silently.

"Yes."

Thor holds him tighter. He holds him all night.

Loki is gone again in the morning.


上面的這一段正是文章的尾聲,看完以後我整個.......被擊敗Orz無言以對的痛。

節錄 2 :


“怎麼回事?”

Thor短暫的閃過一絲瘋狂的念頭想著他們就這麼逃跑,再隨便什麼其他的地方重新開始,但他又很快的甩開了它。

“我們是兄弟。”Thor說。

Loki垂下他的手。那是一個沉重的判決,且現在正介入於他們彼此之間,宣告著一切。而他們無法收回它。

“我知道,”Loki安靜地說,接著聲音更加微弱,”我不在乎。”

Thor試著想微笑,但那個笑容很慘,弧度破碎。“其他人永遠都不會了解。”他說。

Loki短促的笑了笑,Thor也是。因為他們自己也永遠都不會了解。而這樣的情況,既可笑又哀傷。

“我不在乎。”Loki將他的拇指劃上Thor的下唇。”我們是不同的,你和我。那些人永遠都不會了解。”

“但是如果他們知道──”

“我不在乎。”Loki回答,移開他的手指。”直到最後,只會剩下我們,對嗎?”

“是的。”Thor說。”是。”

“那麼抱我。”


以下原文 :

"What's wrong?"

Thor has this insane, fleeting idea to suggest they just run away, start over somewhere else but he shakes it away.

"We're brothers," Thor says.

Loki drops his hands. It was a loaded sentence, and now it's just sitting there between them, spoken. They can't take it back.

"I know," Loki says quietly, and then even quieter, "I don't care."

Thor tries to smile, but it's a sad one, broken at the edges.

"People will never understand," he says.

Loki laughs shortly, and Thor does too, because they're never going to understand it either. And something about that is as funny as it is sad.

"I don't care." Loki runs a thumb over Thor's lower lip. "We're different, you and I. They'd never understand."

"But if they knew-"

Loki pushes his thumb against Thor's lips to silence him.

"I don't care," Loki says. He pulls his thumb away. "It's only us in the end, right?"

"Yes," Thor says. "Yes."

"Then touch me."

大概就是從這段開始一路到結局,劇情就籠罩在一股山雨欲來的絕望裡。儘管中間上了頗為香豔的肉,說真的也很難撫平這一切沉鬱的痛。我喜歡這一段裡Loki如此鎮定,面對Thor的掙扎時,如此堅強。唉可見他多麼愛自己的哥哥.......Thor的猶豫沒有錯,他以自己的方式在愛Loki。我想這是他們彼此性格落差所造成的,Thor希望除了自己以外Loki獲得完整的幸福,即使那個幸福裡恐怕無法有他的一席之地;但對Loki而言,擁有Thor他的世界就已經完整,所以他才會說""It's only us in the end"。

....................................我突然非常沮喪,正經的說,這對真會有HE的一天嗎...........................

 
 
http://archiveofourown.org/works/388720?view_adult=true
以上原文地址
http://www.mtslash.com/viewthread.php?tid=48213&extra=page%3D2
以上翻譯出處 

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我一定是瘋了......才會在星期一結束一整天瞎忙以後還熬夜到凌晨3點多把一百多頁的小說看完,而且值得讚賞的是讀原文。 

不得不說,好的文字駕馭者就像了不起的魔法師,他可以任意的催眠並改變你的既定價值觀,而你一點都不覺得奇怪甚至會欣然接受。我覺得自己很幸運......很喜歡在無聊時亂踩雷,但近期幾篇不只沒被雷倒還意外地覺得好看,而這毫無疑問是譯者/作者的功勞。

說說這篇。一切起始於The Avengers裡迷人的Tony Stark.儘管神兄弟笨笨的另有一種萌點,但無疑的Tony給觀眾呈現的是背道而馳的魅力,聰明。雖然他跟博士的科學腦相比很難硬去分出高下,但我敢說在綜合評比上Tony一定是成員裡最聰明的一個,而且Loki最後倒的大霉有很大的功勞必須歸給聰明的Iron Man。於是話說回來,應該要彼此恨得要死的兩個人該怎麼湊到一塊真的很引人好奇,因而這個想法的契機便促成順應了好奇心的我點開這篇來閱讀。
Asgrad的女巫(?) Amora在文章中做了月老的角色( 我對她的了解不深......只知道她似乎跟Thor有段糾葛/算是反派/或許還跟Loki聯手過可關係不好?/正妹.....但無所謂這裡她不算主角) ,起因是一個愚蠢的報復人的魔咒然後促成一段好姻緣XD~即使主軸劇情有點老梗,很多小說也不吝惜地大肆使用過,但不知為何作者輕描淡寫的就把它表現得相當輕鬆逗趣而且迷人。翻譯很好,但接著讀原文以後會覺得更有味道,畢竟有些時候語言的轉換無法避免一些逼不得已的刪修增減,所以可能的話很建議看一遍原文。整體來說句型雖然流暢但都很簡單,也沒有太多的深難字甚至不需要字典,所以看原文對我們這些非母語使用者應該也不會太吃力。裡面有很多安排過得小橋段會讓人忍不住"哈哈"的笑出來,所以真的真的很推原文。
肉有......但不算太多安排也合理,安排上也堪稱美味。作為吸睛點可以算中規中矩,只要對Top or bottom別太堅持即可安心享用,不然跳過也可。詳細描寫大概在原文75-85頁這個區塊如果沒記錯的話(翻譯部分還沒放出來。)
結局是不意外的HE...畢竟這麼可愛的文風要寫成BE讀者會翻桌吧,所以請開心地服用。裡面真正悲劇的可能只有錘哥......他依然如此深愛弟弟可惜這篇的(L)TL不是往常那個...XDDD~唉但話說回來我大概也不會常換CP看,因為拆CP真的很怪,儘管文章跟故事很精采.......巴特我是相當忠實的Tony/Pepper & Thor/Loki派......
順說,人物掌握的貼合電影也是大亮點,我好喜歡Loki嚇得博士變身那段XD~原翻譯有的地方……大概是對岸用語的關係我很不習慣,於是自己重新譯一下。沒力氣全篇翻完,只挑自己最喜歡的。


以下節錄:
“安靜。”Loki說,下一秒便消失在廚房哩,留下Tony一人。

Bruce在下一分鐘走進來,眼睛看著甜甜圈的盒子。他在伸手抓走一個甜甜圈之前先朝Tony點點頭並打了招呼。

“Thor說,呃,他說昨天晚上Loki在你房裡。”

他說這話的時候並沒有看Tony,看起來就像個害羞的國中生。這讓Tony爆出大笑因為他確信自己並沒有做出任何對方所想像的那種令人臉紅的事,完全沒有。

“說真的,你們倆看上去就像在指甲沙龍裡八卦的三姑六婆。他只是來我房裡並且治療了我的肩膀。我的貞操依然完好無損,就像童子軍的榮譽。”

“我認為Thor看上去更擔心Loki的。”

接著,在Tony組織好一個完美的反擊以彰顯他們正討論的事究竟有多荒謬之前,一個聲音已先一步迴盪在空氣中:

“我的貞操怎麼了?”

然後Bruce就像在原地凍住了一樣,因為Loki驟然出現在他面前,並從Bruce那裡奪走了他拿在手上的甜甜圈並用相當天真的樣子小小地咬了一口,看上去卻比Tony以往所見過的他更加美麗也更加邪惡。

Bruce往後跳接著……是的、是的,他們早先討論的事情Loki讓它發生了。他變成了浩克並且瞪著Tony好像這一切都是他的錯,下一秒Loki開口說:”快跑。”

於是他們逃走了,Tony和Loki倆翻過沙發並向下跑到大廳,同時Tony笑得無法自己,簡直到了幾乎沒辦法呼吸的程度。而後Loki抓住他的手腕用魔法轉移讓兩人逃逸無蹤,將Bruce丟給其他人去對付。


原文:

"Be silent," Loki says, and is gone the next second, leaving Tony alone in the kitchen.
 Bruce comes in the next minute, eyes on the donut box. He nods a hello to Tony before grabbing one. 
"Thor said uh, he said Loki was in your room last night." 
He says it without looking at Tony, which is just so junior high school that Tony barks out a laugh and what he definitely does not do is blush because it's not like that, not at all. 
"You two gossip like you're at a nail salon, seriously. He came and fixed my shoulder for me, my dignity is still intact, scout's honor." 
"I think Thor is worried more about Loki's," Bruce says. 
Before Tony can formulate a wonderful comeback as to just how ridiculous that is, a voice echoes from the air: 


"What about my dignity?" 


And Bruce freezes in place because Loki is suddenly in front of him, right up in his space and he plucks the donut from Bruce's hand, taking a chaste little bite and looking more beautifully evil than Tony has ever seen him. Bruce jumps back and yeah, yeah that does it. He hulks out and look straight to Tony like it's his fault and then Loki says, "Run." 


So they run, Tony and Loki are bounding over the couch and down the hall, and Tony is fucking laughing, he can barely breathe he's laughing so hard. Loki grabs his wrist and they teleport out of there, leaving the others to deal with Bruce. 


太可愛了這段>//////////////////////////////<忍不住要再吐槽一次......他倆真同類XDDD
 
 
图片
非常美的片子。

一部好的電影,除了優秀的劇本與演員,出色的對白果然也不可或缺。而”大藝術家”除了會令你著迷於片子裡細膩有緻的運鏡和風趣又充滿感情的劇情外,雋永而深刻的台詞是它最迷人的靈魂。

在輕鬆明快的喜劇走向下,其實有不少讓人深思和唏噓的地方。新舊價值觀的衝突之間一個驕傲而出色的演員將如何面對自處,是這部片子裡著重探討的最大主軸。做為出名且大受歡迎的默片演員,男主角無疑是出色的。在沒有對白的狀況下必須用各種你所能想到的方式讓觀眾理解你,這必須要相當了不起的表演根底以及驚人的入戲才能方可呈現最完整的表演,因此不難理解男主角對於自己是個”藝術家”的認知有多麼的自豪而強烈。然而讓人唏噓的是你無法阻止時間,無法停滯時代,或早或晚每一個領域都會面臨大破大立除舊佈新的境遇。而很殘酷的,如果你無法接受並改變,你終將被人遺忘。裡面有個場景對於這部分的全是非常出色,讓我印象極為深刻。有聲片開始如旭日東昇,而默片做為西沉的夕陽卻仍苟延殘喘時,在一場訪談裡身為明日之星的女主角說”舊的不去,新的不來……那就是人生。”而接著下兩個場景,女主角的同伴見到男主角時興奮的說”很榮幸認識你!我的父親是你的超級粉絲!”以這種曲折哀婉的台詞與劇情銜接出”舊時代已然過去,你曾經受到歡迎但已不是現在”的手法,實在太精采了。隨著男主角的落寞,我也在下一秒讓眼淚奪眶而出。

我想我是天性念舊的人,一直以來我都覺得默片很美,並嚮往著當年它們在戲院裡曾經多麼風華絕代。因此當劇情逐漸走向無聲電影的時代過去而有聲電影的新時代來臨,我依然跟著失意落魄的男主角哭了很多次。縱然拒絕新事物而終究被淘汰這種命運似乎是人生在世便無法避免的,但是我仍然捨不得看著曾經如此風靡人世的東西落得繁華盡磬、門前冷落。

幸好,導演在片中強調過的一個原則──觀眾最大──導演與編劇並沒有忘記,所以在經歷種種波折後,身為渴望喜劇與圓滿的觀眾的我們終舊如願以償,看見男主角在最後決定振作精神重新開始,女主角也得償宿願、成功幫助了曾經幫助過她、而她一直芳心暗許的人。最後的最後,倆人的歌舞橋段由導演的一句化為有聲的”完美”做結,而一直拒絕發聲的男主角也終於開口說了他的第一句台詞,接著電影便切換成我們熟悉的有聲模式,象徵新與舊的價值在互相碰撞磨合後,融合而成更有價值得新模式,彷彿在告訴我們”一切都會變好,只要你願意尋找實踐它的方式”。

當然,我也毫不吝惜用自己最滿足的笑容,以真誠的心意接受這部好電影傳遞給我們的柔軟與溫暖。

 
 
我很討厭人家叫我會計小姐,由於之前和前總公司合作以及社會上的刻板印象造成我對這個職稱非常感冒的心態。我寧可被叫做小妹或助理,也不想當會計小姐......雖然我確實是有在在幫忙請款跟作帳......唉。

昨天看了一篇Thor衍生,White Nights。將近10萬字的大作品,寫得極好。儘管作為主角之一的哥哥有些被邊緣化,但仍然是個非常出色的故事。
筆者寫出了我原本想在Avengers裡面追求的Loki的形象,也是在Thor裡面那一個Loki......聰明卻陰鬱,不相信任何人又滿身棘刺,卻偏偏渴望柔軟與溫暖,最後被自己傷害的體無完膚,轉而讓愛變成淒涼的恨,再以最極端的方式報復所有他愛的與愛他的人。即便看到後來揪心的要死,卻無法不承認這才是我想看到的弟弟。
此外,我想對我來說這故事的另一個大亮點是活化了在同人裡面幾乎會被神隱的女主角/女配角。我很喜歡Jane雖然短暫卻亮麗的過場,愛極她在裡面對兩兄弟所展現的睿智與溫柔。
好吧......上面雖然說了一大堆冠冕堂皇的想法,仍然無法否認走喜劇路線的Loki還是比較治癒的.......(艸)畢竟當初我看Thor最後弟弟毅然決然地放手那裡,那實在是......為此,兄弟倆你們在官方裡還是繼續笨下去吧!!

讀者在Blog留言:
慕無心桑您好,於2010年的8月CWT買了您的經年《壹》
我是當初說有點貴的那個XD 書末很意外的有您的留言(應該不記得了吧)
我最近開始找在坐車通勤時看的書,又重看了一次經年
現在我覺得300塊一點也不貴,您的文字值那個價值:)
(厚度和字數都很十足,在高一點也不會奇怪)
當初看到御守那,灣說著,本田菊的愛情有沒有實現就不得而知了的時候
覺得有種悵然的愁緒,這樣就結束了嗎?
但今天看完的時候,才發現封面有個「壹」字←這人眼殘
讓我很期待續集....!
灣的視點在前面,而本文是菊的視角,我很欣賞這種可以同時看到兩位主角心境的寫法,以及文字間的那種空白間隔都是有時間感的設計
覺得您的文章很實在真實不馬虎,菊灣兩人個性也都不會違和
只是隔了很久才又來造訪,不知道貳出了沒?(怕沒買到QQ)
不過稍微看了一下,感覺應該是還沒XD
可是又有點捨不得看後續,覺得得一直追太吊人胃口了w
總之很支持您的創作^^/// 

看完以後只覺得......親愛的,姐姐我好愛妳啊T_______T
如果沒有這些時不時出現,加油打氣的話,我很好奇這個世界上會否還有網路寫手這種生物存在?我無法愜意地說寫作是快樂又輕鬆的事,畢竟不管怎麼說,除非抄襲,那每一個字都是作者從心理掘出來的血肉,無論受到的共鳴是多或少。然而明明是辛苦甚至痛苦的差事我們卻樂此不疲,為的就是尋找這種在人海中有一部分靈魂能夠熱烈共鳴的同伴吧。寫作的人沒有讀者會死,畢竟我們是一群無法開口卻需要聽眾的殘缺者。
唉不過要把貳寫出來天知道還要多久Orz......這20萬字噢........

.........母親在本周的狀態不意外的非常好。沒有嘔吐、沒說全身痠痛、沒有病懨懨........................................................很好。爸我真愛你啊真的。